Its not really clear what it does.
Try answering these questions in plain language:
- Who is this for?
- What problems do they have?
- How does this help with that problem?
- How is it unique or better than the competition?
Then feed that into Gemini and ask for a landing page.
zainbahari · 6h ago
It feels like you are trying to raise VC money at the moment. I mean, look at that H1:
"Bridge the gap between data and decisions"
If you are planning to send traffic to your website from real customers and convert them, my recommendation to you is to start with a narrow focus. How about this for an H1:
"Chat with your Shopify and ad data to understand what's driving sales"
Or:
"Link Shopify + your ad accounts, chat with your data and get insights"
JohnFen · 5h ago
It's very high on the flash and marketing glitz and very low on information. What, exactly, is the product or service?
"Bridge the gap between data and decisions"
If you are planning to send traffic to your website from real customers and convert them, my recommendation to you is to start with a narrow focus. How about this for an H1:
"Chat with your Shopify and ad data to understand what's driving sales"
Or:
"Link Shopify + your ad accounts, chat with your data and get insights"